Jacqueline and Jillian
"Jacqueline!" cried Jillian,
my younger and very smart brother. "We need
to go up the hill to fetch a pale
of water!" Ok I said but I no something
bad is going to happen. As
we started for the hill I tripped over 3 rocks
and bumped into about 3 things.
Why does everything always have to happen
to me I said out loud. I
need to sit down I said to myself in my head.
"jacqueline, I think that
you should sit down" Jillian asked nicely.
How does he always no what I am
thinking? he's very smart. and (I said in
my head) I'm very thirsty.
"Let me go get you something
to drink" Jillian said running off. I
looked up and I saw a man with
red eyes walking quickly toward my little
brother, and three little boys
walking behind him, each bouncing their
ball at the same time and always
on the same beat. As I sat there I
thought that this wasn't something
good. So I got up and ran to my
brother and he was standing there
with a soda. There's a guy with red
eyes coming I said and I don't
think he's very friendly.
"I know" Jillian said. "I
can see the future you know. And I know a lot
more than you think. You
see these are three very special ladies. They
are Mrs. Who, Mrs. Whatsit, and
Mrs. Which." Um, Which ones who, and
whatsit you talking about? I said
nervously because they appeared out of
no where. One of them stepped
forward and said,
"We arrived here using fifth
dimension. We did that by adding the other
four dimensions and you can travel
through space without going the long
way around. In other words,
to put it into Euclid, or old-fashioned plane
geometry, a straight line is not
the shortest distance between two
points." Um............. I said
blankly
"She's not like us" Jillian
whispered to Mrs. Which
"Oookkkkk" Mrs. Which said,
"Tttttttthhhhhheeeeennnnn aaaawwaaayyy
wwweeee gggoooooo!" We used
fifth dimension travel to get to the hill to
get a pale of water. Ummmm.......
I said blankly. We just went across
the str, but i was cut off by Mrs.
Which,
"Hhuuuussssssshhhhh ccccchhhhhiiiiiilllllllddddd!"
she called. "Now we
must leave you here for you must
face the grate dangers alone." Well, I
said, its just a hill. Then
everyone stared at me like I was a trick dog
that couldn't do tricks.
"How could a child so......
unintelligent be related to someone like
Jillian." Mrs. Who said stubbornly.
"Anyway" she continued "We must give
you gifts to W your mission.
Jacqueline, you will be given the gift of
clumsiness. These powers
will be used to fight against the evilness that
you will be facing. And Jillian,
you will have the gift of wisdom. Now
off you go children, we can not
fallow you anymore. So you must face the
dangers alone.
Jillian and i started for
the hill be before we got to the top we both
looked up and there he was.
The man with the red eyes. He bent down
staring a Jillian. He screamed
"Don't look at his eyes,
they'll hypnotize you!" but before he looked
away he was already under the spell
of the man with the red eyes. I
closed my eyes and when i opened
them they were gone. So I went tot the
top of the hill to see if they
were in the well and when I looked down I
could see something moving.
I looked farther in the well and I could see,
that it wasn't Jillian, or the
man with the red eyes. But I could still
recognize this strange figure.
Then, I realized that it was my father?!
Father! FATHER!!! I screamed.
"Jacqueline, is that you?"
he called from total darkness. Father we all
thought you were dead.
"I know I've been down here
for the last two years. But forget about
me, we need to find Jillian before
its too late. Quickly get me out of
this well and ill explain it to
you.
"After I got him out of
the well he quickly explained to me how the man
with the red eyes tricked him to
getting water for him from the well and
then pushed him in and left him
there he hoped forever. But it wasn't and I am glad for it. We were both
especially happy to see each other again and then we took a corner around
the pizza shop right next to the old cheese making factory but before I
could even think my father pulled me back so hard I let out a soft screech.
What is the matter father? I questioned sadly from my hurt arm. Why did
you do that.
Well, I he said I just saw
the man with the red eyes walk through the door to the cheese factory.
So I have decided that we are going to fallow them.
So as we went in we could
see the man with the red eyes talking to someone, but we didn't know who.
So we snuck in very quietly and hid behind an old cheese crate. They
saw the two of them, The man with the red eyes, and Jillian. But
it looked like they were talking to someone, who were they talking to?
suddenly the both of them heard a beating noise. The beat was the
same beat that the children were bouncing the ball. It was getting
stronger and stronger. Jacqueline and her father couldn’t stand it.
It was like the beating noise was taking over their brain. Then Jillian
walked over to them from behind the crate and said
“I present to you, IT!.”
The beating noise got stronger and stronger. And then appeared a
giant brain.
“Hello friend, I am IT and
I am here to make everyone equal and happy” the brian said promisingly.
but we both know that that wasn’t what he was wanting. But it seems
that the beating was less infecting me than my father. And then I
remembered that Mrs. Which gave me the power of clumsiness and Jillian
the power of wisdom. So I was too clumsy to get taken over by the
power of the beating. So I quietly snuck away cause IT was mostly
trying to take over my father and I went over to Jillian and begged, Jillian,
don't you remember me? Im your sister the one that you can read the mind
of and in that instant he was back to normal and we went over to our father
and Jillian used the fifth dimension to go back to our house. When
we got back mother and father got back together once again. And everyone
was happy, except Jillian. I walked slowly over to him and asked
him what's is the matter? And he replied
“We never got the pale of
water”